Are my song writing skills rubbish? (Be Honest)?

Actually this isn't rubbish at all. This is very good ^ _ ^ I can really imagine listening to this. It's also rather unique. I'd love to listen to this on the radio as well because it reminds me a bit of the music I like to listen to. Have you got a tune for it? I can't wait to hear this on youtube, radio or even in the charts :D:D